From: PK myuutsu (arace@psbnewton.com)
Subject: [PW!]Caught by suprise [1/2]
Newsgroups: alt.games.nintendo.pokemon
Date: 2000/06/24
[OOC: I would like some feedback on this half of my PW! post]
"So, which way should we take to Celadon?" Adam asked
"We can go the short way, and take the Cycling Road..."Michelle
commented
"..or we can take the longway and go though Lavender, Safferon and
then to Celadon." Adam fnished
"Cycling Road" everyone said in unison.
The group walked west until they arrived to the gate where Cycling Road
began. Adam opened the door and let eveyon else in before him. Inside
they noticed a square room with a large door opening, like a garage
door. They saw all the different types of bikes all lined up in rows,
all the different colored bikes, and all the people that were going
biking today.
"Let's hurry up and get a bike" Adam suggested
The group split up to find a bike of their choice. Adam found a green
mountain bike, Malk found a red bike that was designed for being off
road and stunts, Michelle and Stephanie decided to get one of those
bikes that two people use. They walked up to the counter and paid for
there bikes and headed towards the exit. Outside the the Cycling Road
Bike Store the group was standing admiring the scenary that they would
soon be zipping by...
"This scenary is a Kodak moment" Adam commented climbing up on his
bike
"Yep" Malk replied
"grrrrr" growled the man on top of the store watching Adam and group
as they were about to slip from his grasp.
"We better get them before they get away" he commented to his
friends who had their pokemon ready.
"THE SHORTS REVENGE!!!!!!!!!" the three people shouted as they
jumped off the roof.
"What the fu..." Adam said as he got knocked down by the leader of
the group.
The leader got back up and kicked Adam in the side a couple of times.
Adam was losing consciouseness and he could hear Malk fighting and Steph
a and Michelle were screaming. Adam then closed his eyes...
<days pass, but it feels like weeks to Adam>
"uhhhhh....." Adam groaned as he slowly regained consciouseness
"whats going on here"
"Shhhhhhhhhhh" wispered Michelle fixing Adam's bandages
"What... happened..." asked Adam trying to get up
"We're ambushed and captured by the shorts kid that Malk beat
earlier" Michelle explained to Adam
Finally coming around, Adam notices that Malkavian and Stephanie were
missing.
"Where are they?" Adam asked
"I don't know, they were taken in a different direction then we
were." Michelle replied
"Oh" Adam sighed getting up
Adam looked around the room. The walls were a maroon colored brick, the
floor a white tile, and the ceiling were steel beams that were painted
green. There weren't any windows, which suggested that they were either
underground or people wanted total privacy. Adam wasn't going to take
this lightly,he reached for his pokeballs, but to his suprise, they were
gone.
"dammit"
Adam looked aound the room for something to use, but there was nothing.
Then from the only door in the room, the leader of the shorts kids
enters.
"So you are finally awake" he said loking at Adam
Adam charged at the leader, and he just side stepped, and a Alakazam
used a psychic on him and sent him flying back into the wall. Adam
slowly got back up.
"what do you want from us" Adam asked
"We want nothing from you, we just want revenge on your yellow
friend for the loss, OH and we're keeping your Eevee friend for our own
uses" he smirked
Adam started to charge again, but the Alakazam stepped forward causing
him to stop.
"I just stopped by to see how you were coming along, anyway I gotta
go hehehehe" he said leavin the room followedby Kazam. Adam ran forward
and slide in foot into the door so it wouldn't latch.
"Whew, that was close" Adam sighed as he signaled Michelle to follow
They walked down a long corridor till they got a fork in the road. The
sign said that to the left, the basement continued, and to the right,
the elevator lead to the first floor of the Celadon store. Adam decided
to take the left path and followed the hall till it came to another door
that said "Warehouse" on it. Adam slowly creaked the door open a bit....
~~~~~~~~~~~
TBC
